Below I have attached other blogposts containing examples of audience feedback:
http://wayvsounds.blogspot.co.uk/2017/04/audience-feedback-final-cut.html
http://wayvsounds.blogspot.co.uk/2017/03/audience-feedback-rough-cuts.html
I started off the process of the development of this magazine advert by importing my chosen photo into adobe illustrator.

I then decided to change the fill of this font to the Rastafarian colour gradient which i had used previously in the digipak. I chose this in order for the date to stand out on the poster from the rest of the information.
I then dragged the record company logo, the band logo and the disclaimer and placed them at the bottom of the magazine advert. By choosing to do this it allowed a level of continuity to be shown across the documents associated with this song.
This advert follows a very simple format, giving the audience the basic information and little else. This technique of not giving much away is something that is often done throughout all types of advertising when anticipation and buzz around a product is high. It helps to keep the buzz going right up to the official release. Personally, I feel the reason for this simplicity throughout the advert is down to the fact that Jay Z is such a huge name in the music industry and therefore positive quotes from reviewers and fans aren't needed as Jay Z has already earned the public's high expectation of his work due to his previous releases. Jay Z doesn't need to prove that this is a good album as, especially as it's from the infamous 'Blueprint' series, his previous work would suggest this will be good - his name as a brand sells itself.
The simplicity in itself makes the advert stand out due to its uniqueness. It is also unexpected, suggesting that the music is also. The color scheme is mostly black and white, making the red tape on the digipak really stand out. The whole effect of this advert suggests that very little effort has been put into the appearance. This implies that the music is so good, and West is so successful, that it doesn’t need to be overly extravagant. This presents West as very confident and somewhat arrogant. The text looks as though someone has written it out in a black marker pen, and the small smudges gives the page a rushed appearance. The album name and release date are the largest pieces of text, highlighting their importance. West’s name is the next largest; this attracts his fans and is also self-promotional. The use of capital letters gives the appearance that the advert is ‘shouting’ at the reader, and implies that it is important. This reflects West’s public image, which has been shaped by many controversies, including anti- Semitic comments, disrespecting Taylor Swift at the 2009 MTV Music Video Awards and attacking paparazzi.
The first thing you notice about this advert is the image in the centre of the page however it does not use photography of the band to promote the artist although the graffti layout of the text promotes the bands new album name. The orange text also makes it stand out and the bright colours make the advert more eye-catching. At the top of the advert there is the bands logo this acts as the bands identity as the logo is easily recognisable and stands out against the pale background. The other main text on the page is the caption that the album is out now, reviews of the music and the album website. The reviews from a variety of media industries promotes the album as it makes the band sound extremely good. Like the previous advert I looked at the advert is also split into 2 panels. The panel acts as a frame to the text which makes the important information within the advert stand out after the initial image has caught the attention of the audience. Overall this advert is successful as the large image attracts the audience and the logo emphaises the advert making it clear what the advert is promoting. The continuous use of the logo font also works well as it makes the advert more attractive.
A trait noticed in most grime and R&B magazine and album covers is that the male looks away from the camera, usually depicting a side on profile which gives off a careless demeanour about the artist. In an attempt to promote the album further there is a list of other well known and famous artists that it features, which in turn, promotes the artists success and popularity. Instant knowledge of where the audience is able to purchase the album from, is a clear example of conventional information found on magazine adverts in an attempt to boost sales. The artist Wretch links the album title to his name the word ‘wretch’ forming a pun in his album heading, this will be an attempt to grab the readers attention. The city blocks in the background give off connotations of him being ahead of the rest of the city, another common trait among grime and hip hop album covers and magazines.
Firstly I went onto the internet and accessed the website 'dafont', this website allowed me to browse an entire gallery full of different downloadable fonts. I used this gallery to find a font which would suit the aesthetic and style of my digipak. I firstly looked in the 'script' section of the website and picked out the 'trash' option in an attempt to find a grim looking font which looks almost graffiti like. I chose two fonts which I then downloaded in order to see what they looked like on the digipak. These 2 fonts: 'basterds' and 'road rage' are shown here. I then added both fonts to my digipak and decided I liked the 'road rage' font more due to its aesthetic and how it fit in with my digipak on a whole.





